Presentation about Dance Video Project

We had to make a presentation in our group (Myself, Sugini and Katherine) about what we had come up with and worked on so far for the Dance Video Project. This was to show our class and our tutors what we have worked on so far. Here is the Presentation we made which actually went really well:

We received some feedback to think about which is to think into our rational of why we chose 3 phobias instead of one, this is to add interest and more of an exciting build to the piece. Once we explained how we had chosen the three phobias and ordered the on commonality and severity they understood this a lot more.
We also got some feedback to just think into how dark we want this to be by referring other dance videos and how they have approached darker subjects. We need it to still work as a dance video we just want it to be edgier and darker and therefore more experimental.
I am happy with how our idea was received by the class and I feel like we can now start really working on things and getting this made well.